All Comments on 'Bee and David Ch. 06'

I have been waiting and waiting for an age and more for you to continue this story because I am completely in love with Bee and David. Thank You for giving us another chapter, please update soon! You have to keep writing. Your fans depend on you ur words. Please can Bee and David finally consummate their love on her birthday. I'm dying here. This story is amazing. You are amazing. Please update soon. Please. So desperate for their ultimate physical union.

A great story. Excellent writing. Hot, hot, hot (certain scenes in particular)

I need more!! Please carry on writing this story

In reality, one of the most frustrating and yet well put together stories I have read! Now of course, you and every one else knows, the story is missing a full and proper end?! So when can the whole world shout Haleiwa? If you want to keep all you're fans onboard for evermore, you will please, give us a truly, happy ending!