All Comments on 'Beebe and Petey Ch. 01'

SUCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just when it got interesting you stop, went from 4 stars to 3, but really should have gave you 1.

You better get chapter 2 out in a hurry.

Chapter 2 is submitted--waiting approval. (Fair warning, though, this IS a series--all but the final chapter end with "To Be Continued."

I really enjoyed this introductory chapter. I find myself invested in Beebe and Petey and want to follow their story to the end.

Their first, fumbling explorations were told realistically and with a sympathetic feeling for their awkwardness. Makes me wish I had a "Petey" to share in my early explorations into human sexuality.

I eagerly look forward to the next chapter(s).

Linked to this from the "Four for Friday" story--interesting to see the start! I'll be perusing more of the series! (Your writing has gotten better between these stories!)

What a delightful, tender, yet sensual story. A great read. I am enjoying the whole series. Thanks very much.

What cute story, it has a very endearing innocence to it.

Great to learn the back story! (I read some of the others first.) Takes me back to my first fumblings, also with a good friend.

I was reading your comment in the thread on religious women then found out you wrote stories, too. LOVED part 1, especially knowing it is a true story. On to part 2, eagerly anticipating more exploring between PT and BB!