All Comments on 'Beer Pong'

Too short for plot, characters or even a proper stroker. Spelling is bad enough, but I knew I was in for a bad story when the first paragraph had the word "languidly." It was used correctly, but if everyone is so horny on the way to a party, would they be relaxed?

This is a good story plot, but the spelling and word usage errors made it hard to read.

This sounds creepily like a non-consent story, not group sex.