All Comments on 'Beginning Again Ch. 05'

Very moving and exciting. Great character development - I can't wait for more.

Very gripping chapter. Can't wait for the final installmeny

Especially when Mac is laying a beat down on your ass.

You do a great job creating characters I want to root for. Your protags in the chapter were so brave, for all kinds of reasons - You just want them to win, to get a break! I can't wait to see how you tie everything up. :)

But what is it about only one more chapter to go?

I think these characters deserve more!

I am loving this story. Excellent character development and buildup. Can't wait for the next installment.

Great character development, great writing, I eagerly await future chapters of the story. You've set the story up so well you could take this storyline quite a distance. Bravo!

OMG! Such a tour de force, I cannot wait for the next chapter. That was awesome.

Waiting patiently as I can. Want to know if he lives or dies.

Sorry for the delay in posting the final chapter. It'll be ready January 29 for sure!

An exciting chapter! Too exciting! Waiting not so patiently for the next, although no doubt it will be worth the wait.

Still loving it! Coupla continuity errors - reference is made to Nadja cooking when earlier she bemoaned the fact that her loss of sight precluded her from this task. Mac soeaks of how she spent 4 years with Aden, but earlier she states she was picked up by him when she lost her sight only a couple of years ago. These are the tiniest of quibbles as it is brilliant! I just don't want either of them hurt or sent away! What will happen? I get to find out tomorrow!

Don't you dare kill Mac!!

I'm afraid to look at the final chapter. You have really drawn me in and even made me shed tears at times. I don't want to cry again but I know I will regardless of how it ends. Awesome story with characters that really tug at my heart!

Hoping for the best. What a great read.