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by Grise_Claire

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jabatwkjabatwkover 16 years ago
wonderful

all i can say is write more..

asiaprofasiaprofover 16 years ago
Excellent by any standards...

And jsut phenomenal for a 1st submission...

Rad'lRad'lover 16 years ago
Excellent!

Absolutely excellent. I found only one typo: 'draws' when 'drawers' were intended. At least I think that the compartments within a chest of drawers is meant. The writing is soft and entrapping. I am looking forward to more!

DryhillDryhillalmost 14 years ago
VERY GOOD

What a lucky sub to have such a good friend/Mistress.

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