by Swilly
What part about ROMANCE do you 'writers' not understand, sex with them saying I love you does not make it romantic. If I wanted to read what I just read I'd go to EROTIC COUPLINGS. 2*
I thought this story was very romantic- love in ordinary situations can be magical. Thanks for sharing!
Perhaps you should open your mind up a little bit. What I wrote there is most certainly a love story. It is a snapshot of the love two people have for each other reflected in their lovemaking. Trashing a story because you think it should be in a different category is just silly.
You clearly have a gift of writing exactly the kind of realistic love making a woman needs. Please keep writing more.
What was wrong with this story? I feel exactly the same with my wife I guess this is just true and very nice too. Literotica doesn't have to mean that everything must be blind lust. Love is very powerful too. I thought this was great well done.
There was no lust, no uncontrollable passion, no unstoppable desire. Everything was done with a deep feeling of love and a desire to show a tender feeling of love. The act of sex was but the sealing of a deeper feeling which words could not adequately express. Tenderness accompanied every act in this beautiful story of a love between two people.
Reading it took me back some 80 years; when first my new wife and I were able to raise the curtain on such a beautifully written first act.
Love is So Very Special! Fiction or not, this is an awesome story. Thank you for for sharing.
So so so beautiful. Probably the best erotic fiction I've ever read. What a dream come true to have a relationship like that. :)