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by CatherineSilver
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yarnspinnerrover 8 years agoproofread
Not a bad first story. But please proofread and spell check. A little more build up wouldn't hurt either.
Anonymousover 8 years agoGreat story - Great descriptions!
Wow……. what a very erotic story! It was wonderful how you developed the bedroom scene through the climax! I would love to leave additional feedback and can be reached at florida_beaches@aol.com Thanks for a great read!
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