All Comments on 'Behind the Lines of the Were War Ch. 03'

I was shaking my head at Renee for assuming Gary would wake up and he would be happy to see her.

Chapter 4 as soon as possible please!!! This could be a very good tv series .

Nothing like a little flu over the weekend to free up writing time. Chapter 4 just got turned in.

Seems like Gary is just as much of an ignorant thug as a wolf as he was as a human. He is too eager and ready to take life before he thinks about what it is he is actually doing. Poor Renee, to wait so long for a mate only to end up with that.

I don't think he is a thug - he initially acted out of ignorance and after being brutally tortured and changed - it is not surprising he would act that way. But I am in pins and needles waiting for the next chapter!! this is so good!

Oh my gosh!! When's the next installment coming out?! Later today, I hope, because I don't want to wait much longer then that to find out what happens!! Great story so far, keep up the good work!!

only problem I have is, she spent what? 12 hours on the trail guarding him? And she didn't catch his scent ONCE?? Even while he's getting tortured? I mean I get 'now he's bleeding and she scents him' but seriously? Major plot hole IMO

Don't wolves have excellent sense of smell! I had a hard time believing it took so long for her to smell him.

Nice ,but damn he had some resentment.