by partwolf
This was 10 pages single spaced. One chapter to go.
I loved this chapter. There aren't many stories that have the same person on a 2 sided coin. Knowing he did wrong but he thought they were right and knowing he has to live with what he feared is amazing. He has accepted it. Well done 5 stars
Now next chapter,quickly please!!! Lol.
Excellent story well written and easy to follow . 5 Stars for this chapter as with all the rest . Looking forward to much more .
Thanks for the great read !
tx cracker
This writing thing isn't easy! Please keep the feedback coming.
Are Anne and Amanda the same person or different? I really like thi story so far but the bit with Renee suddenly waking and asking her brother to train him then falling BCK into unconsciousness was very cheesy. Even for my romance, HEA loving self. Lol other then that love it ❤️
'Love Hurts' originally recorded by the Everley Brothers, 1960, and by several others before Nazareth. Can't remember who I heard first - it wasn't the Everleys. Probably a UK artist. Nazareth's seems to be the definitive version.
5* thanks for sharing
Dixon (UK)