All Comments on 'Behind the Lines of the Were War Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Much too short!

Loved it! My only request is for slightly longer chapters!

partwolfpartwolfabout 9 years agoAuthor
It doesn't seem like that

This was 10 pages single spaced. One chapter to go.

angelicbeautyangelicbeautyabout 9 years ago

I loved this chapter. There aren't many stories that have the same person on a 2 sided coin. Knowing he did wrong but he thought they were right and knowing he has to live with what he feared is amazing. He has accepted it. Well done 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I hope they'll be ok

If one more were dies, I won't be able to stand it!

lucianloverlucianloverabout 9 years ago
Thank you for sharing your story.

Now next chapter,quickly please!!! Lol.

txcrackertxcrackerabout 9 years ago
Great Stort !

Excellent story well written and easy to follow . 5 Stars for this chapter as with all the rest . Looking forward to much more .

Thanks for the great read !

tx cracker

partwolfpartwolfabout 9 years agoAuthor
Last chapter just got submitted.

This writing thing isn't easy! Please keep the feedback coming.

rbjrw1030rbjrw1030over 8 years ago
I'm confused

Are Anne and Amanda the same person or different? I really like thi story so far but the bit with Renee suddenly waking and asking her brother to train him then falling BCK into unconsciousness was very cheesy. Even for my romance, HEA loving self. Lol other then that love it ❤️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

'Love Hurts' originally recorded by the Everley Brothers, 1960, and by several others before Nazareth. Can't remember who I heard first - it wasn't the Everleys. Probably a UK artist. Nazareth's seems to be the definitive version.

5* thanks for sharing

Dixon (UK)

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