by partwolf
Names changed. Hard to follow. Other wise I like the flow of the story and looking forward to Stanley getting a good butt kicking.
Having Renee with her own pack and new problems, plus those people that end up dead.
Don't hold back on feedback, I'm working on being a better author and I'm an attention whore.
Your take on the Were Nation is unique and I wish I had thought of it first. ( smile).
Keep up the good work, I am waiting anxiously for your next installment.
Next one will wrap up this story. Where do you think it will go?
Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate the hard work the authors here put in now that I've tried it!!
I've got another twist in the genre I'm working through for the next series.
I hope Alpha Diggs gets what's coming to him. Please don't let the ones who left the pack get killed by Diggs' betas!! looking forward to the next chapter.
and should be up in a day or two. Thanks for the feedback, please keep it coming.
Didn't see that coming lol. Just fantastic. Thank you really good story.
I know the next chapter has already been written but I'm praying that no more innocent wolves are killed. There's already been enough loss to fill 2 books! That being said you've become my new favorite writer! I wouldn't care so much if you hadn't done such a great job building characters worth crying over. Thanks for such great storytelling.
It's hard enough to keep track of all the characters in the story without characters switching names on us.
I realize that you have a lot to keep track of too, but your editor/proofreader should pick up on name changes.
Apart from that, my other complaint is that the story's too addictive!
Names, names,names. Do you proofread ar all? I think every chapter has had at least one name mixup.
You're better than this.