All Comments on 'Being Neighborly is a Good Thing'

Great story!! Is it true?

Would be better if longer, and without sex starting so fast. Take your time. Build up to it. From my perspective it'd have been better/more erotic -- and more realistic -- for there to have been teasing between her and him in a detailed step-by-step manner then progressing to kissing, petting and ultimately the sex (oral and/or vaginal) before bringing up the bi-sexuality thing. That would have left a logical beginning for chapter two, etc.