All Comments on 'Believe It or Not, But It's Love'

I though this story was very well written, to bad it was not longer and I hope you tell us how she let janet go

Hi! Thank you for commenting! This is my first submission of literature on Literotica. I just wanted to "test the waters". Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated! Keep on loving!

I really like the theme of this story. It doesn't even need the sex; it has all the makings of a first-rate black comedy. Sadly it finished a little abruptly, reading almost as if you tired of it. The story is quite well written and I wonder why you've not submitted anything else---you certainly show potential as a writer for this site.