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Rasmatover 8 years agoStill loving it.
Perfect pace and dialogue. Would prefer the submissions to be a few more pages. Not a criticism, just my own preference.
Anonymousover 8 years agoYou need...
... a good editor. The story is there, but definitely needs tweaking.
Anonymousover 8 years agoGreat story
It would be much easier to follow if you kept it on the same section.
can't wait to read more!
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Catharinas_Lit@Catharinas_LitUPDATE 09-09-2016: BELLE OF BELLVILLE I've just come to the conclusion that BELLE will have more than 12 chapters. In order to finish the story the way I had it in mind, it will be extended by at least an additional chapter and an epilogue. I hope this news is welcome! ~...
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