All Comments on 'Belle of Bellville Ch. 11-12'

Nice. Thanks for the new addition

Wow i'm so glad you continued this story!!!!

Thank you, i havent really read this chapter and went straight at the comment section, cos waaahh thank you for updating

Great update! Glad to see you're back! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

The transitions between scenes was a little difficult to follow (I thought there was a paragraph missing between the last installment and this one). I reread the end/beginning and after the 2nd time, I got it.

After I got it...HOT DAMN! Granted, those two REALLLLYYYY need to learn how to communicate in plain English (I love Texans, but y'all's coloquialisms drive me to drink), and say what needs to be said.

I was expecting Chuck to woo Elena and use her to get to Bella. Did not see the kidnapping coming! I hope that Junior uses this opportunity to pull his head of his ass.

Lastly, I hope that Bella stops being such a priss, and makes Chuck loose his ever-loving mind by "bedding" Jake in front of him, and he has a nervous breakdown. Or, she could just shoot him...whichever.

Please write more! This is sooooo good!

Is there an eta on when the next chapters will come out?

Like its forerunners this is well written, leaving the reader wondering what the next twist will be.Hope our author has not got writer's block because her prose has, to this point, been wonderful.

Yet another author MIA, and yet another story uncompleted. Lit needs to put some kind of icon on unfinished stories. Truly, this is incredibly frustrating. Probably about the tenth story I've found leaving the reader in the lurch.

Would love for you to finish the story

...the bed & breakfast!

right when it was getting good. you should be ashamed of yourself.