All Comments on 'Ben & Nat: Love at Home Alone Pt. 02'

by Stelmaw

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good job, hands!

This is so sweet and loving and not too serious. Can't wait for more :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Still loving it

Just like chapter 1 it continues in the same way of sweet unconditional love between them, you even added a bit of silliness that lightens up the mood and allows connection on a deeper level.

And I still give it a 5*!

mharrisonmharrisonalmost 8 years ago
Still good

Still a good story and good writing. For me I'd prefer slightly longer chapters but don't let put you off doing what you are as it's excellent :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great descriptions

Thanks for the descriptions. Love Ben's reddish-blond haired chest. And I love that they're headed for the bedroom and who knows what sexual adventures. They should stare at each others' naked bodies in awe!

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