All Comments on 'Ben's Party Ch. 04'

I just read on your profile where you had just uploaded your 50th story. Let me ask you this. Did you bother to finish ANY of them? It took 6 years to get this far in this little tale and this chapter was published over 7 years ago. I will never click on one of your /stories/ again.

What are you on about?

You're not exactly proficient at the old story telling yourself..

One story disguised as three and two of them getting scores of less then 4 out of 5 while the last one got 4.04. Pathetic writing.

I doubt many people will be reading any of yours anytime soon.

Remember: people in glass houses etc.