All Comments on 'Bent & Broken Ch. 04'

He can do the mom too!!!

Way to go. Not drawn out for another 14 chapters. Boy gets the girl with a promise of years to build a relationship. Thanks, FSqueeze.

Get all 3 of them together, mum watching them both having sex, and while this is going on, mum is playing with her self, and her son hears her moaning, and walks up to her naked, with his erection so hard

No need to continue just for the sake of continuing.

Let us anticipate a huge olymic f*ck worthy of a gold medal in the future instead.

And leave the mom out it even if you tapped on the subject a little.

Hmmm, lonely Mom in waiting, while Claire is in training. Mom works way to hard, and just can't get that big curved cock out of her mind! Looks like you need to continue this series.

Overall, I'd say this story was good, not great, but I could see a lot of potential. I've read so many erotic stories that for the most part, I'm more interested in reading about the relationship dynamics than the actual sex. Thus, I loved that you threw Claire's 'boyfriend' in there to complicate things. That took a 'done-to-death' scenario (injury caretaking as catalyst for lust) to a new level and really captured my interest. So it is a very good story as is, but if you had paced things a bit slower while Jimmy was working through his anger and played up Claire's guilt, the story would have read smoother. Keep writing, though. You keep getting better and better and I look forward to what you do next.

Yes indeed there can be such an attraction between an aunt and nephew.

Mom/son? I'm not so sure that is quite beleivable here in this story. Perhaps leave it there. Anyway,....well done!

Hopefully there's lots more to come.

That is one of the best stories I've ever read. Thanks

Loved this series. Definately need to finish it up with one more chapter at least. Would love to know if they end up together or what happens. But thank you for the amazing story. Read all four chapters straight through.

great story thank you. I agree that you need to finish it with another chapter of the next few years.

what's in it for me?

no long term regard for the other

how can I use you for my own convenience?

take, use, abuse.

meh

One of the best I’ve read on here. Would also love a final chapter.

This on literotica? How but this is something youd actually find in a book, most stories on here are just people describing theyre pleasure of sex, this story contains emotions, real life situations, and anger, rate 9/10 !

Need to find out what happens during the training and after the Olympics.

Good plot and Great writing.

Thanks

Not sure! Enjoyed the story and the little twists but the end with so many possibilities - I guess I was hoping for a better way for them to get together without killing Mom/sister!! Not easy If you want to keep it believable and didn't want to get Mother/sister involved (right call IMO). Still gave it 5 stars as found the story very engaging.

A truly fun and sexy story! I hope you'll continue this someday! Thank you!

Sorry to see it end. Good characters - genuine emotions - would love to see a new chapter 5 years later, post-Olympics.

OMG thanks 100% HOT

WAUW !

Thanks for sharing ;-)

anti-climax. Anti-everything, or is that Ati-all?