All Comments on 'Bent Double'

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ReefBeachReefBeachover 7 years ago
Good story, a bit overloaded

Loved the description of Nurah - much more real than a porn star. Great description of the sex.

Why was Nurah doing herself in her bedroom? Thinking of Tim in shower probably but give us a hint, maybe at the end?

Maybe too much for the first time? Squirting, anal, facial, oral... don't just tick the boxes, be true to your characters. That said, it's fiction after all.

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