All Comments on 'Bermuda Ch. 03'

IMNSHO, your writing is marvelous; your story-telling ability delightful. Given to verbosity, myself - as witness by my stories, I am somewhat disappointed by the chapters' brevity. In any event, thank you for nearly-flawlessly edited, superb story.

Thank you for the compliments. This chapter felt like it had a natural beginning, middle, and end, so I just went with it. I am working on the next chapter, though. Hope to have it finished by next week.