All Comments on 'Bermuda Ch. 08'

Having Charlotte serve her masters anally is the best part of the story so far. I lost track of the day; is it day 4? There isn't much time to have that eavesdropping couple get in on the action. Would that be considered part of the contract as drawn up? . I like this story more because the wife is the bigger sadist of the two. I thought bringing Charlotte in as the narrator was a good idea.

You write like every woman you ever fucked had to fake their orgasms, and you're so stupid you never knew.

I've enjoyed the whole story to date (nothing more here at the time of writing). The characters of the wife and Charlotte are particularly well drawn and the relationship between them all feels well drawn. Really enjoyed how the whole thing is being done. The section from Charlotte's point of view is good, you get a glimpse of maybe she is much more up to this than the couple guess and plays along a little. I do wonder if we might have been better off with that a mystery though. The submissive character is very well done. I've given every chapter full 5 stars.

To all who may be wondering: Chapter Nine is completed, and will be published here in January 2021.

Thank you so much for all of the enthusiasm and support I have received on this series.

January 2021 ?