by deeej77
It's means it is
Its means beings it
Apostrophes are important. Your story might be good but I gave up.
Good start.
You did warn us that there would be mistakes in this chapter. There were a few but not enough to take away from the story.
Its a great start to a story with potential. Please do not let some asshat with grammar issues discurage you. Guess what i misspell have grammer mistakes and still have people from 3 states come to me for hip and knee replacement.
Good Job ! Well written, compelling and not to wordy.
As you said, it is not perfect.
Despite the few grammar issues etc., it was fun to read.
As others have said " don't let the grammar police get you down".
Keep writing !!
Thank You,
Wz