All Comments on 'Berserking Giants Ch. 00'

by deeej77

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Editor needed

It's means it is

Its means beings it

Apostrophes are important. Your story might be good but I gave up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Interesting start

Interesting start... Please continue :)

ariesgirlariesgirlabout 9 years ago

Good start.

You did warn us that there would be mistakes in this chapter. There were a few but not enough to take away from the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
really?

Its a great start to a story with potential. Please do not let some asshat with grammar issues discurage you. Guess what i misspell have grammer mistakes and still have people from 3 states come to me for hip and knee replacement.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
loved it

More please. and i completely agree with the surgeon.

Winzip042109Winzip042109about 9 years ago
Looking forward to more...

Good Job ! Well written, compelling and not to wordy.

As you said, it is not perfect.

Despite the few grammar issues etc., it was fun to read.

As others have said " don't let the grammar police get you down".

Keep writing !!

Thank You,

Wz

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