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Click here'I'm going to cum inside of you sis' he growled. Anna breathed out heavily as she felt her brother's cock explode inside of her, his cum filling her and leaving her feeling warm inside. Adam gave a few more thrusts before he pulled out and collapsed beside her on the table. Anna sat up and looked down to see some of his cum dripping out of her pussy. She ran a hand down to her pussy to collect some of his cum. She put her finger to her mouth and slowly sucked his cum off her finger. Adam looked up and grinned at her sheepishly. He sat up also and grabbed her face between his hands, and kissed her passionately.
'I love you. Thank you for giving me the best birthday present' she whispered when they broke apart. 'Best brother ever' she added with a slight giggle. They pulled apart when they heard keys jiggling in the front door.
'Anna, Adam, guess who's here!!' they heard their father yell out.................
- COMMENTS
softandgentleover 6 years agoGreat. Got me nice and hard and I came soon after. Lovely to hear these stories from a woman.
Anonymousalmost 8 years ago""
Adam gently guided his cock into her until he hit the thin wall of her virginity.
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...uuuh, I don't think so! You just finished shoving three fingers up her twat, she doesn't have a hymen, jeez!! ...damn theres a buttload of uneducated/virgin authors on here! Well so far the story is pretty good other than that, though thats pretty huge since its the focus of the story :(
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoThankyou for your story. I's great to read an Aussie story and so lovely written.
Pleas think about writing some more.
Anonymousover 10 years agoWonderful job!! I loved the story and in the end I about shit my pants when the parents were walking in. Haha great cliffhanger there. You will have to write another story to top this one. :)
ansdguyover 10 years agoBut I have to raise a few points here. First off, the story felt quite rushed, as if you couldn't wait to finish it. Then comes the 6" stilettos, really? I'm not sure that the most accomplished hooker can wear those things. Beside, sis would have to buy them at a strippers supply shop. Finally, their first time sexual experience and her first experience with intercourse happens on the dinning room table? Ouch! Not really plausible. Doesn't the brother owns a couch or a bed? I make these criticisms to help you understand from a reader perspective what doesn't work well. I am likely more critical than many. I don't think it's a bad thing to expect more than the usual drivel one often find on this website. I'm sure you strive to be more than simply mediocre.
Good luck with your future writing adventures,
ansdguy
Anonymousover 10 years agoFor a very well written story.
I enjoy reading stories by Writers who leave out the bull.
OH and I DONT read negative anonymous comments.
If you write negative comments have the hanging things to put your contact to it.
When I read something like this story I like to let the writer know personally
D.
dutch513over 10 years agoBest thing you can do is use what this site offers . Get someone to proof read and edit for you .Don't let the feed back get to you . Good luck and keep writing you will only get better with practice .
Anonymousover 10 years agoYou hate people being anonymous? Then stay the fuck off the internet, newbie. You're like someone who moves next to an airport and then complains about the noise.
Anonymousover 10 years agoYou hate anon reviews, huh? Did you ever stop to think that some of these anons don't have accounts here? Or maybe they don't want to post using their username?
I don't post with my username anymore because I got tired of assholes spamming my inbox criticizing me for being critical. The inability to deal with criticism is a sure sign of immaturity.
That said, it irritates me to see writers using apostrophe's instead of quotation marks for dialog. It's pure laziness. Don't give me the song and dance of that's the way they do it in the UK. I know plenty of UK authors who don't do that.
