All Comments on 'Best Birthday Ever'

Wow, what a great sister to have. Love the story that gets to the business straight away, without three pages introduction.

What is with "bro????" Don't do that. No sister says "bro" that much, if at all. "Meathead Rob Lowe" thinks your writing sounds stupid because of it.

...but that was fun. And yes, sisters do call their brothers bro; both of my sisters call me that. But her sister told him her name was Karen, and she arrived as Ashley.

I was hoping he would fuck his sister, too. Hell, I wanted to fuck his sister.

I really wish more writers would get proofreaders.

That was great. Thanks

Great story one of your best so hot cant wait to see Emmas Awakening chapter 6

so, first the black girls name was karen, then it magically changed to Ashley. and also the brother made fun of his sister for living at home when she was 21 and then less that 2 sentences later it said she went to a catholic school with uniforms. so . . . . yeah. terrible story.

Lots of really annoying, distracting little errors that a proper proofreader would have caught. 1*

What 21 yr old still goes to a school that requires them to wear a uniform??? Plus ewww he didn't even wash his cock after fucking Ashley's ass then he fucks his sister's pussy after.

Where shall I start?

Nope just leave it!!!!! Not worth the time!!!

Regardless of the details, or maybe because of certain details, I came and really hard. I like your work, keep writing please.

Great story keep it goint

Lol, that was awesome, but begs a second chapter!! Thanks ;)

Very hot