All Comments on 'Best Bus Ride Ever'

Loved the story nice to this point makes me want to go for a bus ride and hope to fine the same orgasmic pleasure

Just the right length and simplicity for my morning coffee break.

Your story is a very good sex fantasy . Interesting and entertaining .

It is terribly saddening that all I could think of was how severely the disease she caught is going to affect her and her family . Not to mention pregnancy.

A sequel could be a much more emotional and intense. That would make it

Worse Bus Ride Ever ,lol.

AMerryman

This was so absolutely woeful that I simply cannot understand the favourable comments.

Appalling, just appalling.

My wife used to get her arse groped on the train home from work.

A nerdy guy half her age would always try to get

behind her and sneakily slide his hands over her

bubble butt. Eventually she took to removing her

panties before leaving work; leaving her with just

her nylons and garter belt under her tight skirt,

and letting him fondle and grope her bottom

to his hearts content.

The writing is pretty stilted, very distracting from the story

I like it. You should do more stories like this. There's simply not enough bus rides like this or cars or trains etc.etc.

You desperately need an editor. Multiple errors in the first paragraph alone plus a missing word. Can’t read crap like this.