by StrongMaster7
.....very hot....you have a knack of creating a movie in the reader's head with your excellent descriptions of the unfolding events....written in at an highly erotic level of intensity....very very nice
I can almost feel and taste the emotion in this story...bravo!
I would offer as well, but it seems men with this particular need aren't that plentiful. Sad days for a lot of us women. More soon please. =^_^= PK
it is so short with so much more that can happen.
Great story my fetishes are red heads, pregnant women and lactating mothers so I absolutely loved the story!
Hi, it's me, Strongmaster7. I am happy that so many people like this story. It is one of my goals as a male author to write stories that appeal to female readers. I appreciate getting comments from females readers, but most are anonymous, and I would welcome any PMs from ladies so that we could exchange a few ideas and I could improve the quality of the stories I write. (Yes, this is a transparent attempt to get contact with female Lit members.) :)
Well played. My only complaint is that it ended too soon. I would have liked more about their growing relationship.
This was a great story.
My own breasts need nursing after such
an erotic description and I need to be fucked
by a cock like this.
Very well written and I really enjoyed how vivid you wrote the sexual encounter and how you wrote from both perspectives, I was only turned off at one point but not enough to keep me from reading to the end! TYFS @ StrongMaster7
I loved the reminder of why I loved breastfeeding. So very sexy! Keep writing!!
Good premise.
Much too rushed.
Needed some extensive foreplay.
Needed conversation during the milk sucking. Erotic conversation.
Three stars.