All Comments on 'Best Friend Helping Out'

I hate to say it, but this was a poor first story. Spelling in parts was terrible, and it was no more erotic than fly in the air. I suggest you stop writing for a bit, and read a few of the stories on this site, to see what readers like and what they want when they read a story. One thing I will give you is that you posted it. It might appeal to some, but not me.

that was good man, just imagine what happen the next day