by speedodave
You need to really expand on it more! Savor his ass, savor the fuck! Way too short!
You needed to slow down and paint a picture with this story. Everything happened so fast I couldn't enjoy it the way I wanted to. I needed some real description and maybe have the characters all to each other. It was a good storyline, however the ending was disappointing. I just wanted more from this...
I know I'm bi but I've never acted upon it. I've got a friend who I think is bi but again he has never admitted it. I'd love to fuck him