by autoplot
The writing is very good and story compelling. Wouldn't mind seeing the obvious threeway live up to the first chapters.
While the situation isn't that new, your writing stile really brings something special out of it. If you decide to release a third chapter, a threesome wouldn't be such a bad idea. Perhaps somewhere outside the house setting though. Keep up the great work !
I don't plan to leave the story here -- a new chapter coming as soon as I can get to it :)
Wonderfully written, really enjoying this series. Can't wait for the next chapter.
That was just awesome! ;). Definately looking forward to the next chapter, or three! Hehehe! Thanks for writing!!
Oh God! Please let there be a new chapter in this story coming out soon. It would be cruel to leave the story hanging like that.
I loved the story.
It's been more than a year and we're still waiting for the 3rd chapter...