All Comments on 'Best Friends Make the Best Lovers'

Maybe you'll be the one for each other....

Many best friends are reluctant to make first move and take relationship to a new level. It is better to take a chance than regret it.

Very nice story Dave , loved it

Wouldn't it be nice if Lily was the one?

She was so giving and had so much to give. He was such a guy, wanting her, trying to hide it.... you have to be glad for them.

Five Stars!

Thanks for all the comments guys, this is my first story up and it's nice to see it's gotten such a good reaction! Thank you all!

Brought back a lot of memories. There are some really great details--like when she "swept down" etc... Nice!

OUTSTANDING!

Nice story. But what does Lily's political position have to do with Ced's weight management?

Natural flow with believeable characters. Now, did he or did he not eat the scab from her left knee?

All the other commenters are airport employees, right?

I liked the story. It was a bit short, but, what do I know, you're the writer. A little more discription of her lovely bod would have been nice. Was she dark or milk chocolate? You know, stuff like that. Good job, Dave