by qualitywheat
Great story, great setup, great action and a complete desire to read in the future what her son Josh accomplishes and the follow on episode where she takes on both Josh and Jason for a long weekend. Entertaining and should lead to more episodes.
Nice comment, appreciated, its on the cards, lol. And possibly with her husbands boss too?
Or is he just brain dead? Stupidity runs amok in a pile of unbelievable drivel.
moria is about to get fucked silly I love these stories tenbears43
I was loving this story till she yelled stop and moved it to the bedroom. Bollocks. In the heat of passion she had to get all cold a 'logical'? The move to the bedroom was so clinical you lost me there. Grrr!
Sleeping with her sons best friend once could possibly be forgiven but all week can not be that is betrayal to her son from both her and his friend the fact that her son said go for it just don't tell anyone is him betraying his mother and father however since the mother betrayed her son first it counter sets it self but it is still the matter of betraying his father all that a side I still did not care for it much cause you made her a whore and a lier
What a really great story, loved the fast paced descriptions and way it panned out.
Going to look for a follow up to this right away.
Wow, best story i've read in a while. Bring on the next chapter
Punctuation and grammar are so bad I couldn’t follow what was happening. Get somebody to edit for you.
4 stars because you had a lot of grammar mistakes. You left gaps in sentences that I had to figure out what you were thinking. The use of of instead of off was particularly bothering. Proff read. It was still a good story. But the flow of the story was interrupted with your mistakes. Work with an editor.