All Comments on 'Best Friends Pt. 04: Naturism'

Maybe it's just the reading for the second time or what, maybe there wasn't that novelty or perhaps I didn't read as carefully, but, a bit surprisingly after the previous chapters, I actually like the old edition of this one better.

Indeed it only needed few minor corrections, most in the beginning you understandably cut here entirely, but you also cut few flavour moments I do miss, the famous painting mention, the "Beckysexual" ponder by Lisa. And all in all, it was like you tried to retell the story out of memory, while you could just edit the old; as a result this one is in even more grave need of editor than the old one was... what again is a bit surprising after the relatively higher quality chapters before.

Don't get me wrong, I like the story very much, and do rant out of over caring love rather than any disgust...

Loving this story so far i was hoping Lisa would have stayed naked for longer and after breakfast they would go on a nude hike together then encountered the guy when they got back to the campsite

looking forward to more

Kinda disapointed Lisa doesn't dig the naked lifestyle. As a nudist myself I'm in the exact same boat as Becky, and it would have been nice for her to gain a partner when it comes to this kind of thing. Overall though, this is one of my favourite stories so far,

Pleased to see some promotion for naturism/nudist in, apparently, a UK context.

Also that it didn't involve her sister/mother/daughter: incest seems to be the predominant interest (or limit of imagination) for most authors on here.

Keep 'em coming, so to speak!

Any hope of "Pt 5: 'Andy's fav CO' ?"

Exceptionally well written, erotic in places and thought provoking in others. I absolutely loved it. Looking forward to the next installment, and wherever that may lead us.