All Comments on 'Best Friends Pt. 10: On Parade'

This has been a great series. I have loved Lisa's journey every step of the way. The writing has been very evocative and shared much of Lisa's angst and her growing realisation of not only her feelings but of the slow acceptance that she had a body worth showing.

Whilst where you left this story was a fitting end to this series, I hope that we have more adventures to come with Becky and Lisa. maybe in a new series?

Keep up the excellent writing. I am looking forward to much more.

Devir Ginator <devir.ginator@gmx.com>

great final chapter

Becky and Lisa wearing nothing but body paint at a gay pride event was a nice idea i thought the ending was sweet

this has been a great story requiax i have thoroughly enjoyed it

i have bought a copy of your story on amazon

i saw on your twitter you are working on a sequel i eagerly look forward to it

I had started this several times but always seemed to get interrupted. I finally finished it!! This is one of the best stories I have read on Literotica (or anywhere else) in a long time. I am looking forward to more of your fantastic writing.

I binged. Chapter after chapter. Well done, perfect pace to the storyline.

I found this a very emotional tale, really well written with just enough humour to take the edge off. I am not surprised at the reaction of some of their group, some people find it difficult to deal with real emotion rather than the shallow ones more frequently passed off as feelings. A very enjoyable tale and possibly a courageous one to write.

An absolutely wonderful story. Somewhat predictable in parts, but how you got to where you were going was absolutely riveting. I applaud you.!!!!!!!

Tony.

Wonderful reading! Just very good! Thank You 😊

just incredible. i am absolutely blown away. what remarkable talent in such a quiet corner of the internet.

Such brilliant series. Loved the underlying development of the relationship and the positive culmination

Absolutely outstanding, sir.

A real page turner.

I defy anyone to resist the charms of this series.

Lisa and Becky deserve their own place in the Literotica hall of fame.

The story was far to wordy.... detail is ok but the detail became laboring. I can not agree with other comments. I did feel some compassion towards the characters but most of the time I just had to tolerate them.