All Comments on 'Best Friends Turned Rivals'

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Mymantoy999Mymantoy999almost 7 years ago
Okay, THIS IS NOT A CRITICISM!!!!

Just my own personal preference. I hate it when ladies fight over guys like this (even in fantasy). I would have loved for an alternative ending, where during the fight the girls turn their aggression into passion. Forget the guy is even in the room and pleasure each other. Become girlfriends and leave the guy alone with his hardon. But that is just me.

I did like the story.

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