All Comments on 'Best Friend's Wife'

I'm not sure one would work with this mess, but you have no idea how to write.

It ended weird. Did he accept the job? Why was Rita acting weird?...so many questions. Otherwise great story.

an outline and making the story flow smoothly. Too many unanswered questions.

Too many unanswered questions.

It was more of an outline than a story.

But all the ingredients were there.

Get an editor and see how you do next time.

What best friend? He barely knew them...1*

I couldn't read this.

Seemed as though it was written by a nine year old.

Keep going. 2 pages is perfect.

Couple is lovely but things appeared to be too hurried, still a good story