All Comments on 'Best Friend's Wife Ch. 02'

This is not story telling....

Fancy your friends wife do you ?

Been there done that. And fun was had by all. 5

YOUR wife went to talk to the other wives, what did her husband do while you were walking off with his wife?

Did you even read this story?You accuse B.T.B haters of not reading the stories if they make a comment you do not like.You hate these kind of stories but yet here you are with the comments.As long as cuck haters like yourself feel free to post the most hated comments then B.T.B haters will do the same..This is a nice story with all five stars.

What's with all the black stockings talk, is this a fetish story?

Yes, I DID read the story, here is the key passage:

"My wife knew a few of the other wives and began chatting with them. Marilyn had not met any of the wives previously, and had not seen the house we were at, so I volunteered to show her around the house and the back yard."

No mention of Marilyn's husband.

I will OCCASIONALLY read these stories in the hope that that the husband isn't a cuck and will deal with the cheaters. There is no indication that this is a cuck story, so there IS hope!

My memory may be off, but I don't recall accusing BTB haters of not reading the stories.

My beef with them is their insistence that BTB is Fetish or Non-Erotic.

non-erotic s....... 1*

In your last story and so were you... nothing different in this one.... Why don't you a d her conspire to get rid of both spouses in your next story and get caught, tried and convicted of conspiracy and both get sentenced to life without the internet.

Wait. You think BTB stories are erotic? What a sick fuck!

Of COURSE the BTB part isn't erotic, talk about a straw man argument!

There are usually sex scenes, especially with the lovers that most people would consider erotic!

another cocksucking WIMP posting DUMB cuck SHIT.

one star

Great start to a wonderful story. the only thing I would do is make sure I included my husband for sure and the other wife, if she was interested. Xoxoxoxoxo Annette

My thing with my friends wife took a strange turn last weekend. I hadn't seen her in a while and was dismayed to see her 30 lb heavier. One of her best points is she's slender. Not now. I may have to go farther than planned. Fat girls are easy

Coming in as anonymous criticising a writer about his fictional story is as low and pathetic as any complete idiotic fool could get. Your either stupid,ignorant, jealous of his writing or pissed off because your wife cheated on you or maybe all the above. Get a life you simpleton.read stories about retards or clowns where you fit in better.

Did you know that you have nothing on your best friend. He has been fucking your wife for the last 3 years and he does her in her ass and she swallows his cum, some things she won't do for you. Ha, Ha.

You have a realistic slice of the cheating life displayed here. Too bad so many of your detractors can’t get past the hurt a former spouse or love inflicted on them. They would have been much better off if they had remained like the husband in this story.

I once made the remark that any husband whose wife has sex with another man is a cuckold and someone pointed out that for LW purposes only a man who knowingly accepts his wife taking a lover, is a cuckold. If that is the standard, how can any of you BTB fans call this husband a cuckold? He has no idea what’s happening.

Re Anonymous (1* another cocksucking WIMP posting DUMB cuck SHIT.) Wow! You came up with that all on your own. Did you read the story? If you did, please quote the lines that made you conclude the husband is either a wimp or a cuck—or did you mean the writer is those things? If you did, you must be a mind reader, for I saw nothing in his Bio that would lead to such a conclusion.

Why don’t we all just judge the quality of the storytelling (writing ability), make constructive comments when we can, and if we don’t like the plot, simply say, “Plot is not one I like.” I bet we’d have much improved stories in a few months. A look back in the archives, indicates stories have gotten worse since the comments got so viscous.

Whether viscous comments are better or worse than vicious ones, but I totally agree with the sentiments expressed in your comment.

There is no doubt that the LW commentariat has its own definition of 'cuckold' as you say (or 'cuck' as many prefer), and we have to accept that the dictionary definition simply doesn't apply here.

And while I definitely agree with you that logic says "Why don’t we all just judge the quality of the storytelling (writing ability), make constructive comments when we can, and if we don’t like the plot, simply say, 'Plot is not one I like'. ”, just think of how boring the LW commentaries would be if everybody did as you suggest.

Lue

And a piece of shit friend. Pathetic!

The portrayals are well done too. Sure they describe two blatantly unremorseseful chaters, but it's not written with a POV of glorifying the cheaters.

Keep going, but get to some sort of conclusion, eh,?.

A man is a cuckold whether he knows it or not. The minute a wife fucks another she makes her husband a cuckold. Period. That's my take. All the other shit is just that, shit. As far as evaluating the writing ability of a writer, that's fine, but this is not a literary site but a porn site, so a good many writers shouldn't even be here, if you evaluate quality of writing only. Subject matters means more to most than whether a story was well written. Shit, no matter how well written, still remains shit.

However, I do agree, why read stories that one knows they won't like , assuming the tags and title isn't misleading. That's why, maybe a review of the comments are in order. Stories that many won't like will be called out.

Not much of a story. The friend, who is no friend at all, waits until his friend is away and then makes a play for the wife. She offers no resistance at all. Nice wife. I did not like the story. No character development at all. Short and sweet. He fucked her and probably with fuck her again. He is obviously a better lover than her husband. That poor guy needs to find out that this guy is no friend. He needs to find out that his wife is a slut. Most of the time these things have a way of coming to the surface. I hope he finds out and kicks her to the curb and disassociates himself with this "best friend" who is no friend at all. 2 stars

Hey, it's only a story. Nobody was injured and no marriage betrayed. It's a piece of sexual fluff. They used to say, "it's only a movie" when advertising horror flicks. It's only a story. A piece of fiction, meant to stir the cockles of the purient mind. Just go with it. It's Fantasy Island. It's someone's dream, not real life. Loosen up, people. It'll never appear in Atlantic Monthly or the New Yorker. Have fun. Enjoy. Dream.

Lamest of all cuckold plots.