by cungy22
From the unwashed, why share your wife with a loeser that can't keep a wife or even get a girlfriend?
are the torch-the-bastard people out there. She's slut, but so are the men in this humiliating story. I guess, just torch them all.
in this story. You are the author Don't know what their history is. It might be long,intense but don't like so many sentences.What,is he fucking twittering?
Yeah, there were a few errors in the writing, but the narrator's feelings, as well as the wife's, came through in, or perhaps despite of, the spare style the author used. And the transmission of feelings is what transforms a dull link of porn sausage into a thoughtful piece of memorable erotica.
By mindless and inept "writer" !!
One of the worst !
actually offered his wife one time when I was staying with them. That was weird and I didn't but from then on the idea was in the air. A couple of nights later she came out to the couch I was sleeping on, did a hand job and left. Next day my friend asked me how I liked her and acted surprised when I told him all she did was rub me off. I left that day, 2 years later I ran into her in an Old Navy store, they had split up. We spent a full week together that time. She is a bit like the gal in this story, once started it's tough to get her to stop.2lczmd
Poor writing, way overused plot, really bad story. Come up with something at least a little original.
Enjoyed the sexy story! I love how the wife relented and embraced her sexuality. If more women did that I think there would be happier relationships. It's just sex, do it and enjoy!
I thought this was a strange story but i liked it. I never read a story where the wife wanted the two men to suck each other off and then she will join in. That is a different twist. I gave the story 5 stars
Wow that was awesome. I hope you continue this story. Would love to read about their swapping and really want to know how she gets the guys to do each other.