All Comments on 'Best Kisser'

Very nice, and I'm going to say something I usually hate other people to say in comments. I want a sequel. I want you to develop it further. Normally what you write should be it: that's the story, and you know when to end it. But this ending opens up so much, and you did this first part so well.

I wish I had friends like this. I could see it and feel it. Thanks.

Like your previous story this is amazingly erotic with the juxtaposition of reluctance with lust. I'm just glad lust won out. You have a gift for description and dialogue unmatched by most others. You should really consider getting a coach (you don't need an editor) and branching out into mainstream fiction.

But please don't forget us erotica readers.

More please! You were just getting warmed up.