by Tomcatfive
It was indeed quite long... but it was hot enough that it didn't drag at all. I'm interested to see where this story is going, too.
is that all?
where's the rest of it? what happens with dick head? do they get caught? is there another guy coming into the tale?
well written very credible and very horny
This is the best chapter yet in this story, with a complex set of relationships intertwined with a plot that never bogs down for a moment. The author has the rare talent of being able to keep a romantic atmosphere to the story, with a tenderness that is too often lacking in so many other stories. This is a truly great piece of writing by Tomcatfive.