All Comments on 'Best of Both Worlds Ch. 02'

This sounds very up close and personal ? Thanks for letting us share either way....

While I may feel sorry for anyone who is fucked up this badly - it's very sad - I have to say that you could have done some more proof reading. There are missing words, incredibly repetitive words, like "headspace", carelessly messed up words like "orientstion" and words like "white" being capitalized when they aren't proper names or titles.

OMG, I just got called fucked up in the comments section of a fetish story site, LMAO

Hi Anonymous, some folk choose to capitalise "White" and "Black" when referring to specific groups of people for the same sort of reasons that we would capitalise "Asian", "African", "Native American", etc. etc. In this use "White" and "Black" effectively *are* proper nouns so it makes sense to capitalise them that way; it's not AP style but it it's not an accident.

Me, I thought this was sweet. Nice to read a story that feels like it's about a real trans person who's not just somebody's sexual fantasy.