by blin18
for including Spike. It was so nice to meet up with him again. And while it set up the threesome perfectly, how sad he didn't get to totally enjoy his night of flirting with Celeste. Not that I think he went away unhappy ;-).
Excellent continuation of first chapter. Bob's gotten a well deserved shot of confidence and the hints of something long-term with Vicky. Even if he doesn't, he will no longer have to want for female company.
You have become one of my favorite authors for writing fun, hot stories. Great characters having fun with their sex lives. What's not to love.
So are we going to see the continuing journey of Spike?
Both BOB chapters brought back memories of interesting times at altitude and geekdom during many years of this old farts worldwide travels. Thanks for the fun.
Blin,
once again you have outdone yourself with a story written so intensely explaining the first contact of tongue meeting pussy. You are a true writer with the ability to use words to transport the reader into the story seamlessly. This is a gift and I hope you keep using it for your reader to enjoy.
A wonderful read. I hope we meet Bob, Vicky and Celeste again.
I love your work. It also makes a refreshing change to read a story based in Australia complete with ausyisims - go the skegs! I am surprised at the low number of comments, there is a lot of folks missing out on your talents. 5 star performance. Thanks
How many nineteen-year-old nerds could wind up having sex with two hot flight attendants without really trying? Great story--First Class!
I loved the first chapter, but this second one just didn't sit right with me. The bar scene was good, but you introduced Amy and sent her to the bathroom and she never came out. Maybe she drank a lot of fluids and never relieved herself that day? I mean at the very least there should have been a note that she came out, saw Bob with the girls and decided he had met his date and carried on herself. The introduction of Spike made no sense. Bob knew he was going to the bar to meet Celeste and Vicky, so he wouldn't need a wingman. Then Vicky's desire to use Bob's dick as her own made no sense either. Not only that but her desire to not even really have Bob, but to have Celeste for years etc made no sense to me either. To me this story ended up not as group sex, but as .. well rape. I feel sorry for Bob.
This one took longer to build, but the "first girl-girl" and final threesome was worth it! Well done!
But primarily for the way hot g/g...the 3sum at end a bit odd.
Celeste certainly didn't come across as the type to be intimidated by a whopper...
I agree with J_Reader_Comics. I was loving the sweetness and romance of Vicky and Bob, the nerd discovering that he's not actually repellent to the opposite sex at the same time as he meets his soul mate...but I'm a hopeless (hopeful is my preferred term, but it's not a common one) romantic. So this chapter started out hopeful, then crashed and burned at high speed. Darn it. :-(
That has got to have been the best girl on girl scene that I've read, and the most unusual three some. Very well done!
Superbly smooth, great read and this group could go on in several different directions easily. Waiting for more with anticipated quality continued.
BRAVO!!
Love your style, the build up and climax, and different. More of Bob, Vicky & Celeste please.
TC.
Sweetly written very wonderful the way you build characters and develop personalities. I'll be looking forward to more.