All Comments on 'Best Vacation… Ever! Ch. 01'

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mBrowmBrowalmost 13 years ago
Warning! Too hot!

Ah, very nice! A bit fantastic, or unrealistic? Who cares? It's a great read. Thanks, deadeye_76!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
if i´m fucking a woman in the ass...,

there´s no power on earth that would make me pull out and come on her back or wherever. it goes in her ass. is the author male?

good story otherwise.

Harvey8910Harvey8910over 3 years ago

This story read like a young guy's fantasy story but i enjoyed the story and gave it 5 stars. I did not like the dom/sub part but it did not ruin the story for me. I wondered where deadeye_76 sould be taking the story from there.

Tallfellow86Tallfellow86almost 2 years ago

I enjoyed the read. At 21 who wouldn't want this? A hot woman who knows what she wants and gets it. I would like to see what happens next. It's a cruise after all.

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You can ask me anything... I don't have to answer, but I usually will. I love the stories and the exchanges on here. Any suggestions to my stories are welcome. I'll listen to anything, even dribble since the delete button is so handy. I'm in my 60s now, stay in shape with biki...