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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 15 years ago
fine story

Well-written, literate, sexy, convincing, real folk in it. What more can I ask?

1950oldracer1950oldracerover 13 years ago
Great

Great story and just a great surprise ending,really good all round.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good writing

Well paced, dialogue quite believable, and a believable plot. Very readable, too. Too many commas sometimes. Commas can break up the flow.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great story - very erotic. Nice pacing and plot very believable. *****

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My stories are somewhat long, and have a tendency to develop a plot. If you are looking for quick sex, perhaps I'm not the author for you. On the other hand, if you're looking for erotica, not pornography, hopefully I'll be able to keep your attentions. Some of my stories ar...

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