All Comments on 'Beta Bait Ch. 02'

Just please dont ruin it by making it a sad ending! But I love the hole "playing hard to get/sex tease" goin on plz finish!

are funny together. Make it better with less grammatical mistakes. Good storyline.

im enjoying it!

Please please do continue;am curious as how this story is going to unfold : ))

What is his deal? Why do they want to execute him now? Whyis he importnt to her so much? Aren't wolves sexual creatures? He should sleep with her already.

and i do not think Donovan is going to get executed, Y has ace up her sleeve, and it just might be sam, they have something that is going to be explosive, not to mention going to shake up things, and her stepmom is a bitch, and going to get hers soon i hope

I like your second chapter. The relationship between Yellena and Samuel is really fun to follow. They really are both hot for one another but afraid they are the only one and neither wants to be hurt, at least that's the way I see it. And wait until S finds out that Y is really the Alpha ill legit daughter rather than a full human. I will defiantly be watching for the next installment of your very first story/series. Congrats on being a published author.

Pls continue, this is wonderful!