All Comments on 'Beth and Rich Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Only critism

Good but WAY too long. Was kinda hoping for some incest action tho.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Tease!

I was definitely hoping they'd get involved all together. Next time, maybe...?

shelikesbigshelikesbigover 6 years ago
Love your writing style.

This may have been a bit long but it flowed right along and was not full of over exaggerations like so many stories. Good fantasy action. Look forward to reading some of your other works if they are as good as this series.

DrShankensteinDrShankensteinabout 6 years ago
Mutual Consent

It's a great story (and storyline). But if they can agree to mutual consent at the conclusion. Why can't that happen before there is deception and manipulation?

BTW most nudist camps do indeed have unisex bathrooms.

goducks1goducks1about 5 years ago
i enjoyed this a lot

well written, clever, fun, sexy!

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