by Bluepen451
Good but WAY too long. Was kinda hoping for some incest action tho.
I was definitely hoping they'd get involved all together. Next time, maybe...?
This may have been a bit long but it flowed right along and was not full of over exaggerations like so many stories. Good fantasy action. Look forward to reading some of your other works if they are as good as this series.
It's a great story (and storyline). But if they can agree to mutual consent at the conclusion. Why can't that happen before there is deception and manipulation?
BTW most nudist camps do indeed have unisex bathrooms.