All Comments on 'Beth and Rich Ch. 02'

Can't wait for the next chapter to see who is fucking who as far as the parents are concerned. Mmmmmmmm.

Very well written. All very plausible.

I like a writer who takes pride in their structure, and spelling.

I see you're quire prolific - I better start another one 😉

Always enjoy stories of converted fundamentalists that discovered the joy of sex! A five star effort. But, just a couple of comments: 1. Glad you corrected "Mai Tie" to "Mai Tai" the second time it was used. 2. Please look up "discreet" (The word you should have used.) and "discrete" (The word used incorrectly.)

Sorry to be the grammar police, but I did find those glitches distracting. Keep writing.

You have a talent for it. Thanks for the story.

This was a great story! I was hoping the couple Beth and Rich encountered on the beach would see them at the fancy restaurant and stop to chat making both sets of their parents wonder where they'd met this seemingly rich and foreign couple! Can't wait for their next opportunity to display their naked bodies on a beach!

Hell ofrom Greece! very well written story dear!

…we must love each other…

…in the same earth we all live…

… a great part of love is forgiveness…