All Comments on 'Beth Likes It Ch. 06'

I read them all. Overall this series is disturbing.

i know. i get it. my freaky sex fantasies are disturbing to most people. that's why they are just fantasies... that and the fact that they are not very realistic (and not intended to be). in any case, as they say: "don't try this at home!"

i am very happy that there seems to be a small group of intelligent people who really like my stories, get that they are just fantasies, and, i hope, get a genuine thrill from reading them. i worked on these chapters for a long time, and only recently decided to publish them on line, mostly because there didn't seem to be a lot of stories like this available, at least so far as i know. i am a genuinely masochistic woman, a person with a pain fetish and a humiliation fetish. of course i could never endure the extreme tortures that Beth is subjected to at the hands of Ben, Jarvis and the others, but I do enjoy fantasizing about such things. i really do, and i am finding out here that i am not the only one.

in real life i might be looking for a responsible and trustworthy man who would tie me up and stroke me with a silk flogger. but in my fantasy life i prefer to be tortured by pirates!

Over all I enjoyed the story. I did think you went a bit over board. However, I loved how Beth understands everything that happens to her is her own fault!

Your fantasies are most enjoyable! Don't let others tell you what to enjoy! If you like pirates better then go for pirates! I say your writing is incredible. The way you describe Beth's state of mind and her every feeling of joy and pleasure and pain is very exciting! Looking forward to more!

Now that I'm reading this again I get the overall flow of the story better. This is really hot!

I admit it. This authoress freaks me the f*ck out. I'm not sayin i dont like it tho! FREE SPEECH BABY!

not boring

Well, the writing is really good and the imagination of what is happening to her brainwashed body is fine; the readers are reminded that this is a fantasy and bears little to the read world. If her vagina is a blistered as written she is in very real danger of developing bad infections that will cause her real pain. Add STDs (that almost never happen in fantasies) and her life is in danger. Well, I am sure she will not die anytime soon so reading is still an adventure.

maybe when i revise it after the novel is finished i'll want to pay attention to the fact that i am mixing realism with fantasy. jan's responses to pain are based on my own, but they are extremely exaggerated. also her stamina, and of course her rate of healing from her wounds, or not being bothered by them, and never having them get infected or anything. so i appreciate your comment, anonymous. i definitely intend to do some revision after the first draft is complete, and that might be an area to focus on.