by empty_coffee_cup
Outstanding, great, fantastic. I really enjoy reading about Bethanie & Maddy. Keep up the good work.
Is a fucking guy writing lesbian stories, trying to get in touch with his inner bitch? This is creppy.
But you know it already. Your stories are both graphic and lovely...not everyone can pull that off.
What I want to know is why someone who can't even spell "creepy" is critiquing (??I'm being generous)your story. I read somewhere on this site a good guide to haters..pretty funny stuff. When I find it I will send you the link.
Ive followed bethy and maddie since lipstick test.. Theyre just the cutest and horniest couple Ive ever read. I hope the next chapter is coming out soon.
By the way, I really appreciate you putting some romance in there I actually go back to this story just to read that part.
Bethy and Maddie are brilliant and endearing; what a great duo! Smoldering, sexy and funny, I really enjoy reading about their "adventures." I do hope you decide to write more about them as I do so enjoy reading them.
And... I REALLY hope Bethy gets her revenge against Maddie ;3 That little blonde needs taking down a peg or two.
Totally brilliant!