All Comments on 'Bethanie & Maddy: The Bet Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Outstanding

Outstanding, great, fantastic. I really enjoy reading about Bethanie & Maddy. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Why

Is a fucking guy writing lesbian stories, trying to get in touch with his inner bitch? This is creppy.

warm_wet_locationwarm_wet_locationover 14 years ago
You got a great thing going here...

But you know it already. Your stories are both graphic and lovely...not everyone can pull that off.

What I want to know is why someone who can't even spell "creepy" is critiquing (??I'm being generous)your story. I read somewhere on this site a good guide to haters..pretty funny stuff. When I find it I will send you the link.

redkryptoniteredkryptoniteover 14 years ago
When is the next chapter coming

Ive followed bethy and maddie since lipstick test.. Theyre just the cutest and horniest couple Ive ever read. I hope the next chapter is coming out soon.

By the way, I really appreciate you putting some romance in there I actually go back to this story just to read that part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
A Brilliant Romp!

Bethy and Maddie are brilliant and endearing; what a great duo! Smoldering, sexy and funny, I really enjoy reading about their "adventures." I do hope you decide to write more about them as I do so enjoy reading them.

And... I REALLY hope Bethy gets her revenge against Maddie ;3 That little blonde needs taking down a peg or two.

Totally brilliant!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

HOT DAMN! Thats a true fantasy right there!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

One of the best story i ever read

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