by bi_sassy_sarah_1987
Keep writing this is a very good start, good pace and charcter development..
Terrific character development. You have me wanting more . . . and more!!
I certainly hope we won't be left hanging too long for the next installment! Thanks.. am enjoying your stories very much!
I think you can not only be good with short stories but have the ideals and creatiness to write novels a good beginning.