All Comments on 'Bethany Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Good start..

Keep writing this is a very good start, good pace and charcter development..

pixie2002pixie2002almost 18 years ago
Loving the buildup

Terrific character development. You have me wanting more . . . and more!!

bobmbobmalmost 18 years ago
Well done!!

I certainly hope we won't be left hanging too long for the next installment! Thanks.. am enjoying your stories very much!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
good story

really enjoyed hope you continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Mmmm nice....

More... more...

chas63chas63over 10 years ago
Awakening

I think you can not only be good with short stories but have the ideals and creatiness to write novels a good beginning.

Cupertino345Cupertino345over 1 year ago

Excellent start! Thanks for the story, keep em coming. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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