All Comments on 'Bethany's Retreat'

Very well written...good build up to some sensational sex...keep up the good work !

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That would be plain old mid-west as opposed to plane old.

Fantastic story very well written

"That would be plain old mid-west as opposed to plane old."

OMG! Thank you for catching that, I'm so sorry! I'll be more vigilant next time, I promise!

And thank you to everyone else as well for the comments and support, I'm glad you all liked it!

:)

While we are commenting on the use of "plane" I'll add, tongue in cheek, if there is anywhere that is "plane" as in level, it's the middle of America. So maybe plane is ok.

One of the best first stories i've seen on Lit. Good job and i'll be looking for more from you.

Good story, I liked it. But I'd love to read more -- maybe a second chapter? Anyway, thank you for taking the time to write & for sharing this story. Looking forward to read more from you.

I loved it, Thanks for sharing it! However, there seems to be much more tale to tell!

I really liked the story line and your writing was great. Good luck in the contest.