All Comments on 'Beth's Night Out'

I think there could have had a bit of a struggle and then another for anal. But thats just me. Still a very good storry.

This would never happen. If they are looking to rape someone, they'd just rape them. "Resistance is futile." Who says that? And she walks away and they grab her in front of tons of people and pull her inside - so someone gets kidnapped and nobody says a word???? Hm.....no. This one doesn't work for a ton of reasons.

Would have loved to see dianne lick beth clean. Then they could have bought the other guard back in for a massive orgy :)

Undoubtedly written by some can't-get-laid-to-save-his life security guard or campus cop.

Good luck man - you're doomed to keep drooling over what you'll never, ever have.

I wish i was Beth :(

Ignore the nay-sayers. If they don't want to read stories, they shouldn't bother. Some of these idiots don't understand that 90% of these stories are fiction. If they are too stupid to understand that, screw 'em.

Keep writing!

Yes not realistic, but that's what fiction is. The only problem was it ended too soon ;-) Keep on writing!

Hope you write more of these